<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Looks great…at least, it’s much better than the old one.<div class=""><br class=""><div class="">One thing that stuck out was the “by Apple Inc.” in the synopsis. I think you should ask one of the Core Team members for advice on this, but to me it 1. reduces the impact of outside collaborators on the language and 2. makes it appear tied to Apple’s platforms when is in fact not. Not to downplay the role that Apple has had in the language, but I feel as though this like should at least be reworded or moved down into the description instead.</div><div class=""><br class=""><div class="">
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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Jun 13, 2017, at 22:06, Natthan Leong via swift-evolution <<a href="mailto:swift-evolution@swift.org" class="">swift-evolution@swift.org</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div class="">Hi everyone,<br class=""><br class="">I have submitted an attempt at updating the swift man(1) page as<br class="">Github Pull Request #10241 [1] based on the JIRA ticket SR-3281 [2].<br class=""><br class="">Feedback is welcomed up to the end of Thursday, June 15th, preferably<br class="">through discussion in the pull request thread and not through the mailing list.<br class=""><br class="">[1] <a href="https://github.com/apple/swift/pull/10241" class="">https://github.com/apple/swift/pull/10241</a><br class="">[2] <a href="https://bugs.swift.org/browse/SR-3281" class="">https://bugs.swift.org/browse/SR-3281</a><br class=""><br class="">Regards,<br class="">Nate @contraultra<br class="">_______________________________________________<br class="">swift-evolution mailing list<br class=""><a href="mailto:swift-evolution@swift.org" class="">swift-evolution@swift.org</a><br class="">https://lists.swift.org/mailman/listinfo/swift-evolution<br class=""></div></div></blockquote></div><br class=""></div></div></body></html>