<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div><br></div><div>On Nov 19, 2016, at 23:48, Anders Bertelrud &lt;<a href="mailto:anders@apple.com">anders@apple.com</a>&gt; wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">Hello Swift community,</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">The review of "SE-0145: Package Manager Version Pinning" begins again after revisions, starting now and running through November 28th. The proposal is available here:</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular; white-space: pre;">        </span><a href="https://github.com/apple/swift-evolution/blob/master/proposals/0145-package-manager-version-pinning.md" class="">https://github.com/apple/swift-evolution/blob/master/proposals/0145-package-manager-version-pinning.md</a><div class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">Reviews are an important part of the Swift evolution process. All reviews should be sent to the swift-build-dev and swift-evolution mailing lists at</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular; white-space: pre;">        </span><a href="https://lists.swift.org/mailman/listinfo/swift-build-dev" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">https://lists.swift.org/mailman/listinfo/swift-build-dev</a><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular; white-space: pre;">        </span><a href="https://lists.swift.org/mailman/listinfo/swift-evolution" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">https://lists.swift.org/mailman/listinfo/swift-evolution</a><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">or, if you would like to keep your feedback private, directly to the review manager.</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">What goes into a review?</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">The goal of the review process is to improve the proposal under review through constructive criticism and contribute to the direction of Swift. When writing your review, here are some questions you might want to answer in your review:</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular; white-space: pre;">        </span><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">* What is your evaluation of the proposal?</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular; white-space: pre;">        </span><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">* Is the problem being addressed significant enough to warrant a change to Swift?</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular; white-space: pre;">        </span><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">* Does this proposal fit well with the feel and direction of Swift?</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular; white-space: pre;">        </span><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">* If you have used other languages or libraries with a similar feature, how do you feel that this proposal compares to those?</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular; white-space: pre;">        </span><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">* How much effort did you put into your review? A glance, a quick reading, or an in-depth study?</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">More information about the Swift evolution process is available at</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular; white-space: pre;">        </span><a href="https://github.com/apple/swift-evolution/blob/master/process.md" style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">https://github.com/apple/swift-evolution/blob/master/process.md</a><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">Thank you,</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">Anders Bertelrud</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""><span style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class="">Review Manager</span><br style="font-family: SFUIText-Regular;" class=""></div></div></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><div><span>_______________________________________________</span><br><span>swift-evolution-announce mailing list</span><br><span><a href="mailto:swift-evolution-announce@swift.org">swift-evolution-announce@swift.org</a></span><br><span><a href="https://lists.swift.org/mailman/listinfo/swift-evolution-announce">https://lists.swift.org/mailman/listinfo/swift-evolution-announce</a></span><br></div></blockquote><div><br></div>Just to pick a couple nits...<div><br><div>I'm not sure "pinning" is the best word, but I don't have any thoughts on what would be better.</div><div><br></div><div>Does the pinning info have to be in an optional file? Would it be better to have it be an optional part of the manifest? There'd be one less file to carry around.</div><div><br></div><div>I didn't follow the discussion thread very closely... If either of these "issues" were debated there, I do *not* want to start rehashing them. Furthermore, IMHO both are pretty minor (especially the first one... it's completely subjective).</div></div><div><br></div><div>+1, either way</div><div><br></div><div>- Dave Sweeris&nbsp;</div></body></html>